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Post by EarlyBird on Oct 30, 2006 16:09:01 GMT 9.5
:)i had this good idea, i start a story and get you lot and me to add when we come online, so anything can happen. it's going to be Mary Lady Van Tassel based, it starts from when she's in the tree of the dead, i always wanted to write this one so here it goes...
Mary woke up, well if you could call this hell waking, her form was whole again.
She gazed down at her hand, feeling the fingers and wrist of it to make sure it was still there.
She stared around, it was hot in there, like hells heat burning red hot flames around her.
The smell of ash and burning could be smelled throughout, the stench very nearly made Mary sick.
As she walked further in she heard large boots clattering behind her, she closed her eyes hoping this was all a dream. As she opened her eyes she sore the Hessians hand around her shoulders.
His large pointed teeth pressed closer against her face as if wanting to taste her.
"You are in hell now Mary..how does it feel to be like me?" he hissed as he held her hands behind her back.
Mary quivered and held her beating corset still, his eyes still fixed to her, hungrily observing her.
"I have wronged many people.." Mary stuttered, "but I.." she tried to continue but was cut off by his hand towards her lips.
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Post by Kathleen on Oct 31, 2006 4:04:52 GMT 9.5
Ok...I've been convinced to add something so here I shall try.  Mary shutters and shifts backwards to avoid his cold touch but is caught in his firm grasp as they struggle. He smiles as he enjoys the fear in her eyes and pushes her down on the ground. (I don't dare go any further...someone else try.) |
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Post by EarlyBird on Oct 31, 2006 4:07:57 GMT 9.5
The ground was colder then the rest of the room, though the room felt hot, the ground was as cold as ice.
She looked up and fear was still within her eyes, the icy coldness of the floor touching her back as she was forced down.
She struggled and lifted her head up, she knew he would not be kind to her, far from kind, a monster is what he was, though some could call Mary that to.
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Post by Mandy on Oct 31, 2006 5:28:02 GMT 9.5
Mary was very frightened she was understand very well what happened to her !the horrible man with his large pointed teeth and his big raucous voice tell again to Mary "you are in hell Mary".
Mary cried was put has to shout!"haaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah ahhhhhhhhhhaaaaaaaa no it's a nightmare"she was feel cold ,she was white but the was hot so hot ...
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Post by EarlyBird on Oct 31, 2006 5:34:07 GMT 9.5
Mary held her head and watched as his hands came closer, she was fearfull, she had never been so scared.
Mary was normally strong, or atleast that was how she presented herself to the world.
As his teeth came closer they shined in the fire light that surrounded them.
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Post by himiko on Nov 7, 2006 4:05:35 GMT 9.5
Always before, she had been the commander, the one in control. The one who made the nasty monsters appear, who maimed, and scared, and killed. Now, all she wanted was someone to make them go away again.
Just before his lips touched hers, he paused. "Why so frightened, my love?" he asked, "Is this not what you agreed to when you called upon me for vengeance? Is an eternity of pain not a fair price for allowing us to be together?"
Mary felt sick, "I'm not your love!" she protested, "I called upon you for vengeance, nothing more." He didn't look convinced. "You are a monster, not a man. I could never be your lover, you repulse me!"
Instead of the raging temper she had half expected to follow that statement, he smiled mockingly, "But Mary, you called upon me to do your vengeance. I killed at your command. If then, that makes me a monster, what does it make you?"
Her eyes narrowed, "Yes, you killed at my command. That doesn't make me less of a human and you less of a monster, though. It makes you less than human. A hunting dog will kill at it's masters command. You're nothing more than a dog, or a halfwitted servant!" At last, anger lit up his eyes. Mary realised that she might have gone too far. His hand slammed into the side of her head, sending her sprawling.
"I was your servant, Mary," he snarled, "And now, you are mine!"
This is a good idea, Al. Mind if I have a go at doing threads for some other Miranda characters?
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Post by Incapability on Nov 7, 2006 5:06:11 GMT 9.5
Oh yeah, do that!!! This is great! we used to do this in another fangroup, it's great fun!
It was hours later when she finally awakened. The Hessian was sitting a few feet away from her,watching her with a sick mixture of coldness and intrigue. Mary swallowed in an attempt to get her voice to work again. "So", she croaked, "is this ... is this hole where you plan to spend the rest of eternity, or are we to get our own cosy little torture-chamber?" Pointed teeth flashed in the light of the flames as he smirked. "Wait and see, my love. Wait and see."
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Post by EarlyBird on Nov 7, 2006 22:00:01 GMT 9.5
Mary was shivering, she didn't know what to do, oh yes Mary seemed a strong wiled woman and she was. But when faced with this monster she had used to get her own revenge had now turned against her, she felt some fear well up inside her. Her head hurt painfully, it almost made her amazingly dizzy, but now she was awake the dizziness seemed to go away a little.
The cold touched her fingers then flew through her light blonde hair, her eyes staring down. He laughed at her fear and raised her head "oh Mary not scared are we.." he chuckled. Mary shook him off of her before trying to stand, but she found herself unable to get to her feet.
He smirked as she stumbled, she sat back down and leant her head towards the front of the tree, her whole body pained her. "Come now my dear" the hessian smiled taking her hand slowly. Mary refused his hand which caused him to pull her to her feet with such force that she almost fell over him. She rubbed her arms with her hands then followed behind him. The whole place was dark and cold, that would never change, since when has hell been anything but painful memories and deathly feelings. Mary stopped as he did then froze at the sight of a noose around a tree. The hessian shew his teeth and carried on walking. He stopped on purpose to scare the wits out of her. "Oh don't worry my dear that isn't your fate..your staying here in my very capable hands.." he laughed.
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Post by Al on Nov 8, 2006 0:53:55 GMT 9.5
erm..just tell me what characters you want, cause i'd rather keep it..as my idea and me starting it..so what ones were you thinking.  |
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Post by Al on Nov 8, 2006 0:55:17 GMT 9.5
erm..just tell me what characters you want, cause i'd rather keep it..as my idea and me starting it..so what ones were you thinking.:Doops this is Al btw forgot to log in...  |
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Post by EarlyBird on Nov 8, 2006 1:00:32 GMT 9.5
;Dsos bout that lol. i am going to start a thread on spide rmaybe or Rita..not sure yet...  |
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Post by himiko on Nov 8, 2006 5:17:43 GMT 9.5
Yay! Can I also suggest Mab and Elspeth?
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Post by EarlyBird on Nov 8, 2006 6:07:43 GMT 9.5
Erm interesting pair..yeah ok..i'll start it soon..or you can do a one on one with me lol one of us can be mab one can be elspeth.. just send me your yahoo and hotmail or one or the other or aol and we can do that? i'll do a thread as well lol it's just one on one would be cool..who would you like to be? |
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Post by EarlyBird on Nov 8, 2006 6:10:35 GMT 9.5
oh yeah i seem to have your hotmail but your never really online lol. if you come online then we can do it lol.
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Post by EarlyBird on Nov 8, 2006 6:10:52 GMT 9.5
next time your here add to the story again please:D
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