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Post by macdaddy on Aug 30, 2010 17:08:32 GMT 9.5
I was inspired by Miranda's performance in Tom and Viv and decided to write a small poem for her. So unbalanced will my life be to me Memories of us parting at sea. No ill will will my temperament bear Your words gather mine and keep me safe there. I can hear myself speak, moment in this Do I disgust you, after only one kiss? I promise to be better if only you'll speak Talk to me now for my future is bleak. Ten years will fall without dancing and games Seven years free from insanity's names Beautiful boy with such shallow eyes Celebrity smiles, oh women and lies. Lover's betrayal consented by wrong Religion has baptized your life growing long Circles keep face by dismembering their young To rid me of pain, I'll breathe through my tongue. You sign your name and secretly mine, Recognition too great to share in a line.
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Post by EarlyBird on Aug 30, 2010 19:12:06 GMT 9.5
wow that was wow XD awesome hun, just plain awesome.
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Post by Annette Claus on Aug 30, 2010 23:35:47 GMT 9.5
That was beautiful!!! I will have to watch that movie again so I can think about the poem more. Great job!!
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Post by queen09miranda on Aug 31, 2010 1:28:41 GMT 9.5
Oh wow. . . I love this movie. I know it inside and out. She totally should have won an Oscar for this!! NICE POEM!!
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Post by macdaddy on Aug 31, 2010 4:27:05 GMT 9.5
aww thanks guys! I'm glad you liked it! It was great watching the movie, because we were reading the play August: Osage County and there are sooo many parallels between the mom and dad and Tom and Viv!
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Post by stephowrites on Aug 31, 2010 5:27:46 GMT 9.5
I loved it!!! You captured Tom and Viv perfectly!
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