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Post by EarlyBird on Jun 19, 2007 9:42:05 GMT 9.5
This is a Mab poem gave up on the Mab fic.
One small step closer to death, one step back to life. One cold chill down my spine, one snatch breath of time. One cold drip of water on my skin, one small heart that beats within. One long road that winds through the snow, when will we die, you should already know. One deep breath, one more step. One deep pause and she is no more. One cold hand, upon your lips, one cold sword the knife does slip. One more moment, to shade from the noise, one shrill cry to your little boy. One small mist that circles through your hair, one small moment and your not there.
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Post by Crysta on Jun 19, 2007 9:47:50 GMT 9.5
*speachless* That is simply gorgeous as hell!!! You must continue that fic BTW
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Post by Mab Rox on Jun 19, 2007 10:11:05 GMT 9.5
That....that...PWNS ALL!
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Post by Incapability on Jun 19, 2007 22:42:01 GMT 9.5
That's really pretty. Your poems are nice.
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Post by Lane of Magic on Jun 20, 2007 1:54:35 GMT 9.5
Very touching *huggles poem*
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Post by hilloneko on Jun 20, 2007 8:30:14 GMT 9.5
that is such a beautiful poem *sniffs*
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