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Post by EarlyBird on Jun 20, 2007 7:10:54 GMT 9.5
Dinah: (weeks later walking through town, hears a gun shot and looks around) Jesus. Guard: Ma'am are you alright? (runs over to her). Dinah: I just heard a gunshot. Guard: I heard it too. Dinah: I think they were aiming for me (looks as a crowd of people group around a shot man). Guard: God! We need to get you out of here.
Dinah: (in her husbands office pacing up and down) What do you expect me to do? Stay here all day everyday. I'll go mad. Blake: So you'd rather you got shot? Dinah: Don't be stupid. Blake: Then do as I say Dinah. I want you to be safe. Dinah: If you find this person then I will be. Why haven't the police done anything yet? Blake: They are trying to find out who shot him but they have no clues. There is nothing left at the scene. It's not that simple. Dinah: To me it's perfectly simple. Look at video footage ask around and bang the man up! Blake: Dinah sit down and let them do their job. Dinah: How can I when they are not doing their job right! (sits down in a chair and sighs). Blake: Take a deep breath and relax. When they find anything I'll tell you but for now stay inside the house. Dinah: That's all well and good but what if they come here? Blake: They wont. Dinah: How do you know that!
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Post by hilloneko on Jun 20, 2007 8:21:20 GMT 9.5
Very good indeed, and also more please T_T.
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Post by EarlyBird on Jun 20, 2007 8:29:34 GMT 9.5
Blake: Look there is always people here with you. And there are guards outside. Dinah: Fine. (looks at him and frowns). Blake: (sighs and holds his head).
Dinah: (sitting in the lounge drinking a hot cup of tea). Guards: (outside on the floor blood pouring from their mouths). Dinah: (hears a floor board creak and looks up) Whose there? (stands up). Jack: (creaps further in and then gets behind her). Guess who! Dinah: (stops in fear and shakes nervously). Jack: (puts the gun to the small of her back) Miss me darling. Dinah: Like a cold sore. Jack: (makes her walk forwards). Dinah: What do you want from me? Jack: Thought that was obvious... Dinah: You are sick! Jack: And you are beautiful.
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Post by hilloneko on Jun 20, 2007 8:33:15 GMT 9.5
Wow interesting twist, more please ^^.
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Post by EarlyBird on Jun 20, 2007 8:37:04 GMT 9.5
Dinah: Touch me and you'll regret it. Jack: Your husband gunna get me locked up is he (laughs). Dinah: Just don't even try it! Jack: (walks to Blake's office and locks them both inside). Sit down. Dinah: (sighs and sits on the desk). You want money? Jack: No...I want you (grins). Dinah: In your dreams. Jack: You always are (looks her up and down). Dinah: Oh leave me alone (disgusted). Jack: (walks up to her and puts his hands on her waist). Don't be like that sweetheart. Dinah: I am not your sweetheart (slaps him hard). Jack: (puts the gun to her chest). Don't even try it. You can't escape.
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Post by hilloneko on Jun 20, 2007 8:41:02 GMT 9.5
again I am amazed by the greatness of Ali, More please!!
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Post by EarlyBird on Jun 20, 2007 8:45:00 GMT 9.5
Dinah: You think I am just going to sit here... Jack: It would make it a lot easier on yourself darling. Dinah: No! (stares at him and stands up straight). Jack: Come back to me Dinah you don't want this loser. Dinah: I love him. Jack: No you don't. Dinah: (walks backwards) I love him! Jack: No you don't! (shakes his head and walks closer). Dinah: I...(bangs into the wall). Jack: You...love me. (kisses her passionately). Dinah: Jack...this isn't right. Jack: (holds her closer and smiles) Yes it is. It feels so right.
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Post by hilloneko on Jun 20, 2007 8:49:03 GMT 9.5
yays for more updating goodness, More please
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Post by EarlyBird on Jun 20, 2007 9:38:37 GMT 9.5
Dinah: But it's not right I am married. Jack: You don't love him. Dinah: Yes I do. Jack: (kisses her lips gently) Stay wth me. Leave this place. Dinah: I can't. This is my home. I love my husband. Jack: Keep trying to convince yourself you love him... Dinah: I do... Jack: You are lieing. Dinah: Get out. Jack: No. I will just stay right here. Dinah: Fine! (folds her arms).
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Post by hilloneko on Jun 20, 2007 9:45:17 GMT 9.5
very Awesome ^^, more please.
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Post by EarlyBird on Jun 21, 2007 1:11:19 GMT 9.5
Jack: (takes her hand and smiles). Dinah all I want is you. Dinah: So you come charging in with a gun (sighs and shakes her head). That is no way to show you love someone. Jack: I needed to get your attention. Dinah: You need to get help! Jack: Look just give me a chance. I have no job...I am alone. I just need you back. Dinah: No you don't. Jack: If you ever loved me then help me. Dinah: Ok...if I give you a job. Here with me. Will you leave this be and just be normal again. No more I love yous? Jack: It's done (smiles and hands her the gun). Dinah: Thank you.
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Post by Crysta on Jun 21, 2007 1:23:12 GMT 9.5
MOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMORE. You must update... NOW!!!! *huggles*
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Post by EarlyBird on Jun 21, 2007 1:30:11 GMT 9.5
Jack: (weeks later sitting in Dinah's office). Dinah...I mean er...Madame. I got this message for you. Dinah: (looking over paper work) Whose it from? Jack: Your husband. Dinah: (looks up in curiousness). Jack: (hands it to her and bows his head). Dinah: It is...he isn't coming home for a while. What a surprise (scrunches it up and throws it into the paperbin). Jack: I will leave you. (turns to leave when he hears her sobbing). Dinah: Just go. Jack: Your crying (walks closer to her). Dinah: No...I am not crying. Just leave me be will you (turns away). Jack: Let me (kneels down beside her and wipes her tears away). Dinah: Since when did you act so caring? Jack: Since I got you back with me. Dinah: We are not a couple! Jack: (strokes her face and stands up) Suppose you're right. We aren't. Dinah: But I do care about you. You still mean a lot to me. Jack: (smiles and kisses her cheek lingering there for a moment). Dinah: (looks at him carefully but nervously). Jack: (captures her lips with his).
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Post by Crysta on Jun 21, 2007 1:37:14 GMT 9.5
OK I must have the next part now. please update soon.
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Post by EarlyBird on Jun 21, 2007 1:46:01 GMT 9.5
Dinah: (looks down and stands up) We can't... Jack: We can (smiles and picks her up sitting her upon the desk kissing her).
Dinah: (hours later sitting in her nightgown smoking a lit cigarette looking over at Jack). Jack: What will he say... Dinah: He's not here. I bet the reason he isn't home is because he is with some woman tonight! Jack: My woman is far more sexy (chuckles happily and walked behind her rubbing her shoulders). Dinah: And you think you're God. Jack: God of love... Dinah: No (smiles and looks around) Oh God what have I done (leans her head back). Jack: You gave into what you wanted. That's what you've done. Dinah: I'm married. Jack: He didn't care when he cheated did he. He didn't stop and think he just did it. Dinah: Now I am as bad as he is. Jack: Don't stoop to his level (kisses her cheek). Blake: (at the door) Dinah (jiggles the door handle). Why is this door locked? Dinah: Oh I was getting changed... Blake: Can you let me in? Dinah: (under her breath) Shoot.
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