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Post by EarlyBird on Jun 19, 2007 18:53:05 GMT 9.5
Blake: Fine, act like a child and do what you bloody like. (walks out). Dinah: Men! (downs her vodka).
Blake: (later that night). Where's Dinah? (to a man). Man: Outside on the deck Sir. Dinah: (chucking his clothes off the boat). Blake: (walks towards her) What the bloody hell are you doing? Dinah: What does it look like! Blake: (grabs her wrist) Stop! Dinah: Take your hands off me (stares at him angrily). Blake: Calm down. Dinah: (looks down pulling her hand away). Blake: Go inside. Dinah: Make me (walks into the cabin).
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Post by hilloneko on Jun 19, 2007 18:53:17 GMT 9.5
Wonderful script ^^. please write more. *puppy dog eyes*
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Post by Crysta on Jun 19, 2007 18:55:17 GMT 9.5
Yes please write more!
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Post by EarlyBird on Jun 19, 2007 18:56:54 GMT 9.5
Blake: Dinah...(walks in after her and frowns). Dinah: You can sleep on the sofa tonight. Blake: This is not your boat it's mine. Dinah: I couldn't give a toss to be honest. Cause if you don't sleep on the sofa you'll be sleeping with the fishes. Blake: Since when did you lose your mind. Dinah: Oh thanks so much, it's all compliments today isn't it (sarcastically). Blake: If you don't stop this I will get them to take you home. Dinah: We're in the middle of the ocean. Blake: I can still get you sent home, do you think it's beyond me? Dinah: (stays silent now not daring to speak). Blake: I thought you'd see sense.
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Post by Crysta on Jun 19, 2007 18:58:34 GMT 9.5
Awsome as ever! Write more please ;D *huggle*
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Post by hilloneko on Jun 19, 2007 19:00:05 GMT 9.5
YAYs, very awesome indeed. another update if you will.
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Post by EarlyBird on Jun 19, 2007 19:02:10 GMT 9.5
Dinah: (the next day sitting in Blake's office searching through his papers). Blake: (walks in staring at her) What do you expect to find? Dinah: (looks up quickly and sighs) Nothing. I was just clearing away some stuff. Blake: Don't lie to me Dinah, I know you're checking up on me. What did you expect to find hum? Dinah: I don't know (sighs and looks away). Blake: Then why look, I told you already I want to make this work. You think I'd throw our marriage away for another one night stand? Dinah: Yes I do (raises her eyebrows and looks at him firmly). Blake: Shows how much trust we have in this marriage doesn't it. Dinah: None (stands up and walks towards the door). Blake: Talk to me. Dinah: We have already talked enough. Blake: No you shouted and I listened. Dinah: Just leave me alone ok... Blake: No it's not ok. Dinah: (pushes past him and walks out to the deck leaning over the edge of the rails).
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Post by Crysta on Jun 19, 2007 19:04:44 GMT 9.5
Beautiful Ali! Such awsomeness!!! It is tasty to read. MMMMMOOOOOOOORRRRRRRRREEEEEEE
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Post by EarlyBird on Jun 19, 2007 19:09:40 GMT 9.5
Blake: (walks out with her). I only ask you try and restore your trust in me Dinah. One last chance is all I'm asking. Dinah: Didn't you say that the last time as well. Blake: Dinah please don't start a fight again I am trying to have an adult conversation. Dinah: Fine talk I am listening. I am not exactly going anywhere am I darling! Blake: Look you know you said you wanted a life with me. You even suggested children at one point. Dinah: There is no children. You made it clear that's what you wanted. Blake: I might be changing my mind. Dinah: For me, to keep me here. Blake: No because we are not getting any younger Di... Dinah: Cheers very much for that comment (sarcastic). Blake: (takes her hand) Please don't leave me. I beg you. Dinah: Blake stop begging it doesn't suit you. Blake: (pulls her closer and smiles). Let me prove my love for you is real. I promise it is. Dinah: Blake...(looks away). Blake: Look at me (turns her face round to face him). I love you (kisses her lips gently).
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Post by Crysta on Jun 19, 2007 19:12:51 GMT 9.5
OK you can't stop now! You must update. *begs*
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Post by hilloneko on Jun 19, 2007 19:15:33 GMT 9.5
yet another wonderful addition. More please.
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Post by EarlyBird on Jun 19, 2007 19:17:54 GMT 9.5
Dinah: (months later sitting at home on the sofa while her husband yells at her). Stop! Blake: I made an effort. And here is you going off with some man you barely know. You make me sick woman. Dinah: Oh come off it Blake you haven't stayed faithful. Blake: I have. You can test me if you want. Dinah: Oh just... Blake: Just what! You slept with him didn't yah. Didn't yah! Dinah: Yes...happy? Blake: How could you do this to me! Dinah: I got drunk. Blake: Stop blaming the drink cause it wont wash with me sweetheart. Dinah: Well I have nothing else to say on the matter. Blake: Well you damn well should. Dinah: I slept with him what else do you want? A photograph a video tape. What do you want from me Blake! Blake: Honesty would be a start. Dinah: Maybe we should just get divorced like I said. Blake: That's your answer for everything isn't it. Dinah: It isn't working anymore. Blake: Only because you're not trying to make it work. And that's the truth you know it is. Dinah: I am trying, what else can I do huh! Do enlighten me. Blake: Fine you want a divorce then go, go on...go see who else will put up with yah. Dinah: (storms out of the office).
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Post by Crysta on Jun 19, 2007 19:21:00 GMT 9.5
Soooooooo delicious!!! And I am still hungry
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Post by EarlyBird on Jun 19, 2007 19:28:29 GMT 9.5
Dinah: Just incase you care...(lifts up her hair showing a bruise on her neck). Blake: What the fuck is that? (shocked, walks after her). Dinah: I saw him, the man I was with was my ex husband. Blake: Ex... Dinah: He used to beat me. I would always cry in his arms and say I understand. It's the drink he'd say. It's always the drink. Then one day he went too far, threw me against the floor and I banged my head on a coffee table ended up in hospital that night. He said once again he was sorry. He didn't mean to. It was the drink, stress from work. But I told him, I deserved better. One man who knows that raising a hand to a woman is not allowed. One man who would never dare do such a thing. Then I met you, thought you were God's gift compared to him. That night I was with him, he kissed me, I fell for it again, that charm. I am stupid aren't I. Blake: No you're not stupid (puts his arm around her).
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Post by Mab Rox on Jun 20, 2007 6:49:33 GMT 9.5
Moremoremoremoremore!!!!!!
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