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Post by EarlyBird on Oct 29, 2006 21:26:31 GMT 9.5
[glow=red,2,300]I wrote this very short poem about lady van tassel, hope you enjoy it, this was my first try so hope it's ok by you lot:D. please give comments..this can be any rating and only use mary and the hessian.
Lady Van Tassel when i look in the mirror When you gaze upon my face can you see whats missing.
Can you see that empty space that cannot be filled by wishing.
When i gaze into the mirror do i see that empty space like all you see?
Or do i see a different person thats only there for me.
My old name was Archer and an Archer i will stay.
My heart may be blank, scared or unemotional.
But cant you see this single reason i learn to hate you all.
When you gaze upon the dead you will never see, the ones that hurt you in the end and leave you this empty.
If i could fill this empty space with love or a friend, maybe i would accept that, but maybe i'd pretend.
So when i look in that mirror the person that i see, is not some evil witch, but a woman that is me...[/glow]
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Post by Incapability on Oct 29, 2006 23:09:23 GMT 9.5
that's so sad, but very true, and very good!
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Post by EarlyBird on Oct 29, 2006 23:32:41 GMT 9.5
thankyou for youre comments, i am glad you liked it:D have you ever done roleplay over yahoo or msn?
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Post by himiko on Oct 31, 2006 3:55:47 GMT 9.5
'Tis most good, indeed!
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Post by Mandy on Oct 31, 2006 4:01:18 GMT 9.5
it's very good my allie :-))u write very well ^-^
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Post by EarlyBird on Oct 31, 2006 5:25:20 GMT 9.5
thankyou all love you lot to bits:D
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