Post by Morgause on Jul 2, 2006 22:08:21 GMT 9.5
I decided to take courage (thanks to ladygiry!) and show you a storie write by me. This is the first one I write directly in english, so probably isn't very well writed. Please, feel free to correct me. Hope you like it!
Another night of vigilance… Valérie Giry is looking throw the window, asking to herself how much time he will survive. “Just God knows, madam, just God knows” said the doctor yesterday, “A week, five days or just a few hours, I can’t be more precise”.
Valérie sees the dark sea, down there in the beach. Everything is so quiet. Johannes finally sleeps; is the only way to calm his pains. She doesn’t know what to do anymore to help him and it desperated her. Johannes Daae made everything he could to help her; now it’s her duty to stay next to him till the end…
Valérie leaves the window and sit next to his bed, watching him. “It’s a piety that I never could return his love for me…” she thinks. One year passed since their left the Opera Populaire together. Despite the confusion that her heart was, she will never forget the first time she saw Johannes. It was during the rehearsals of a new opera where she was the leading ballerina. She needed to dance a very complicated solo accompanied by violin and no one of the violinists was able to do it in perfection. So Messieur Lefevre hired the famous Swedish player, Johannes Daae to do it. And since the moment he puts his eyes on Valérie, he realise that was impossible to forget her. She was the most beautiful women he ever seen in his life! And how she danced!
Since that meeting he tried and tried to conquest her and one night he was succeeded! She kissed him at her bedroom’s door! But he never understood why she looks so fearful and nervous in their next meetings. “He never knew Erik” thought Válerie, “and never saw what he can do!”
After the end of the show, he proposes to her leave everything behind and goes with him, just bringing her daughter, of course.
“Please, come with me” he begged while hugged her, “I love so much, I can’t be without you…”
“I would like to go with you but I can’t, Johannes, I can’t…”
“Why? Why you can’t?”
“I just can’t leave everything I built behind… I’m the leading dancer of this Opera and I have a daughter…”
“Meg will come with us, of course, and you don’t need to dance anymore, I can perfectly provide a good life for all of us! It’s something else, Valérie, something else that frights you and you never tell me!” he answered.
Valérie looks to him, terrified. “Yes, its Erik” she thought, “it’s Erik my reason. He loves me and I love him too, despite of everything I told him… But his love is so obsessed and suffocated. And Johannes is offering me a possibility to escape from him. Should I accept it?” she thoughts while Daae hold her close. “My head says yes, but my heart… It would be good to Meg have a family and stay aware from Erik, even he was her father…”
“All right, I accept, Johannes, but we need to leave this place now!” she reply.
“Why, Valérie?” he asked with surprise. “Why all of these hurry now?”
“Don’t asked, just say that we are going to leave this night!” she supplicates. “If Erik suspects of something…” she imagined, “You will be dead certainly…”
At the beginning everything was right. She, Johannes, Meg and Christine (his little daughter) moved to a beautiful house near the sea. Johannes introduced her to everyone as his wife and no one doubt about it. Christine and Meg became best friends and spent all the days playing in the beach together. Life was quiet and happy there. Till Johannes get ill… Since then, everything changed. Nobody knows exactly what he has; no doctor can alleviate his pains.
Johannes moves in his bed and Válerie awakes from her memories. “Valérie, are you there?” he asks with effort. “Of course I am, darling” she answered while passing her hand in his face, “Of course I am”
“I’m dying, Valérie, I’m dying, I won’t pass this night, I know I won’t…”
“Shh, don’t say these again, Johannes, don’t say this again…”
“Please, Valérie, promise me that you will take care of my daughter, please”
“Of course I will, Johannes. Do you believe I will not? Johannes? Johannes? Oh my God, please Johannes, are you listening to me?” She asked perturbed.
She puts her hands on his shoulders and shakes him very gently, but nothing happen. Válerie removes her hands tenderly and withdraw behind. Tears start to fall from her beautiful blue eyes. After all, she liked him has a good friend, and he loved her so much…
Valérie walks to the mirror in front of the bed and looks to herself. The mirror returns to her the image of a young and beautiful sad girl. “The dream ends… Now it’s time to return” she says low, “Time to return to all; time to return to Erik…”
Another night of vigilance… Valérie Giry is looking throw the window, asking to herself how much time he will survive. “Just God knows, madam, just God knows” said the doctor yesterday, “A week, five days or just a few hours, I can’t be more precise”.
Valérie sees the dark sea, down there in the beach. Everything is so quiet. Johannes finally sleeps; is the only way to calm his pains. She doesn’t know what to do anymore to help him and it desperated her. Johannes Daae made everything he could to help her; now it’s her duty to stay next to him till the end…
Valérie leaves the window and sit next to his bed, watching him. “It’s a piety that I never could return his love for me…” she thinks. One year passed since their left the Opera Populaire together. Despite the confusion that her heart was, she will never forget the first time she saw Johannes. It was during the rehearsals of a new opera where she was the leading ballerina. She needed to dance a very complicated solo accompanied by violin and no one of the violinists was able to do it in perfection. So Messieur Lefevre hired the famous Swedish player, Johannes Daae to do it. And since the moment he puts his eyes on Valérie, he realise that was impossible to forget her. She was the most beautiful women he ever seen in his life! And how she danced!
Since that meeting he tried and tried to conquest her and one night he was succeeded! She kissed him at her bedroom’s door! But he never understood why she looks so fearful and nervous in their next meetings. “He never knew Erik” thought Válerie, “and never saw what he can do!”
After the end of the show, he proposes to her leave everything behind and goes with him, just bringing her daughter, of course.
“Please, come with me” he begged while hugged her, “I love so much, I can’t be without you…”
“I would like to go with you but I can’t, Johannes, I can’t…”
“Why? Why you can’t?”
“I just can’t leave everything I built behind… I’m the leading dancer of this Opera and I have a daughter…”
“Meg will come with us, of course, and you don’t need to dance anymore, I can perfectly provide a good life for all of us! It’s something else, Valérie, something else that frights you and you never tell me!” he answered.
Valérie looks to him, terrified. “Yes, its Erik” she thought, “it’s Erik my reason. He loves me and I love him too, despite of everything I told him… But his love is so obsessed and suffocated. And Johannes is offering me a possibility to escape from him. Should I accept it?” she thoughts while Daae hold her close. “My head says yes, but my heart… It would be good to Meg have a family and stay aware from Erik, even he was her father…”
“All right, I accept, Johannes, but we need to leave this place now!” she reply.
“Why, Valérie?” he asked with surprise. “Why all of these hurry now?”
“Don’t asked, just say that we are going to leave this night!” she supplicates. “If Erik suspects of something…” she imagined, “You will be dead certainly…”
At the beginning everything was right. She, Johannes, Meg and Christine (his little daughter) moved to a beautiful house near the sea. Johannes introduced her to everyone as his wife and no one doubt about it. Christine and Meg became best friends and spent all the days playing in the beach together. Life was quiet and happy there. Till Johannes get ill… Since then, everything changed. Nobody knows exactly what he has; no doctor can alleviate his pains.
Johannes moves in his bed and Válerie awakes from her memories. “Valérie, are you there?” he asks with effort. “Of course I am, darling” she answered while passing her hand in his face, “Of course I am”
“I’m dying, Valérie, I’m dying, I won’t pass this night, I know I won’t…”
“Shh, don’t say these again, Johannes, don’t say this again…”
“Please, Valérie, promise me that you will take care of my daughter, please”
“Of course I will, Johannes. Do you believe I will not? Johannes? Johannes? Oh my God, please Johannes, are you listening to me?” She asked perturbed.
She puts her hands on his shoulders and shakes him very gently, but nothing happen. Válerie removes her hands tenderly and withdraw behind. Tears start to fall from her beautiful blue eyes. After all, she liked him has a good friend, and he loved her so much…
Valérie walks to the mirror in front of the bed and looks to herself. The mirror returns to her the image of a young and beautiful sad girl. “The dream ends… Now it’s time to return” she says low, “Time to return to all; time to return to Erik…”