LadyoftheNight
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Everywhere I go I am spellbound
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Post by LadyoftheNight on May 22, 2008 22:49:43 GMT 9.5
Queen Mab drabble 'You choke a scream Crushing a dream Made the scheme real...'~ Crushed Dreams ~He had been her last (and only) hope and now with Mordred dead she was completely alone. Mab, Queen of the Old Ways, could feel her time coming slowly to an end. For years she had watched her dreams and hopes of bringing the people back to the Old Ways crushed before her eyes. Her sister, the Lady of the Lake, had told her to accept the changes and move on but she couldn’t. She couldn’t just accept and fade away – to be forgotten. In vain she made Merlin but he had only betrayed her and encouraged the new religion to spread, wiping out all that remained of the past times. She could only really blame herself for that failure with Merlin. But she had been so sure with Mordred. There had been no flaws in the plan, except that Arthur managed to mortally wound him before Mordred did the same. She couldn’t save him and as she watched her dreams die with Mordred, she rose for one final battle which, for the first in her existence, she would lose.
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Post by Lane of Magic on May 24, 2008 8:40:56 GMT 9.5
I remember having already read this as well on ff.net. And let me just say it was very beautiful, do write more! In fact, there's a Drabble thread somewhere in this section, which I'm sure could use with some more writings!
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Post by Libitine on May 25, 2008 1:53:06 GMT 9.5
Yes, it is quite, Drabble-esque. May I make one small suggestion? Make one forum for all of your ficlets so we can read them back to back or just for the simple reason that the board looks much neater with only one thread of ficlets from the same person as opposed to three or four.
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LadyoftheNight
Mirandaholic
Everywhere I go I am spellbound
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Post by LadyoftheNight on May 25, 2008 3:27:53 GMT 9.5
Thanks both of you okay I will do just that
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