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Post by EarlyBird on Apr 15, 2007 5:32:27 GMT 9.5
I was supposed to get the dvd, but alas it has not appeared yet. So I will do a short fan fic to keep us occupied lol, i based it on the tiny clips from trailers. Hope you like Veronica looked over at the new girl, she felt sorry for her, wondering if she could help. Maybe she should invite her over, or maybe she should just leave her to fend for herself. When a large woman suddenly got up Veronica's eyes stared at her, she was ready. "What the hell do you think you're staring it!" the large woman hissed. Kiranjit stared up at the woman "i'm sorry" she whispered nervously. "Leave her alone" Veronica suddenly hissed, the woman turned to Veronica angrily. Then ignored her and looked back at the helpless Indian woman "i'll take that" she smirked. The woman grabbed Kiranjit's afters and walked off, but before she could sit down Veronica grabbed her arm. "Give it back!" Veronica hissed "now!!" she added sternly raising her eyebrows and looking fearless. The large woman laughed at Veronica and slammed her hand down on the table. "What would you say if I said I wanted your cake 'an all" the woman muttered coldly. Veronica shrugged "I'd say you can have it" she grinned picking up her tray. Smacking the much larger woman over the head with it. (if you want more ask and i'll write it hehe).
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Post by Mab Rox on Apr 15, 2007 11:51:18 GMT 9.5
Yes, I want more. ;D That was good.
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Post by EarlyBird on Apr 15, 2007 19:39:37 GMT 9.5
Yay someone liked it:D here's more just for you had to change the name on the post her names Veronica hehe.
Veronica watched as the larger woman went to grab her but Veronica grabbed her arm. "Don't even think about it" she hissed, even though Veronica was much smaller in size and height. She was very strong willed, the woman pulled her hand away staring at Kiranjit. "Next time your friend wont be here to save you" the woman shouted loudly. As she left she slammed her hand down on the table which caused Kiranjit to jump. Before storming out of the lunch area towards the gardens. Veronica smiled and the Indian woman before going back to her cell. Later that night Kiranjit was sitting in bed when she looked up at Veronica to see if she was still awake. "Why did you help me?" Kiranjit asked nervously, Veronica turned her head and sighed. "I guess i've just always hated a bully" she said plainly laying down in her bed. "Goodnight Kiranjit" she said softly, Kiranjit smiled ever so slightly at her cell mate. "Night Veronica..." she whispered laying down in her own bed silently. "Call me Ronnie" Veronica corrected her calmly, before rolling over and closing her eyes tightly to sleep.
(want more just say so lol:)).
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Post by ladygiry on Apr 15, 2007 23:05:19 GMT 9.5
Interesting. I'm liking this.
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Post by EarlyBird on Apr 15, 2007 23:37:21 GMT 9.5
yay two who like it:)i'll add more.
The next morning Veronica woke up early as always, got dressed and ready to go out for breakfast. Kiranjit got up a few minutes later seeing Veronica brushing through her dark hair in the mirror. "Ronnie?" she smiled, Veronica looked round and smiled back at her. "Yes Kiranjit?" she said gently. "Do you think I will ever be free?" she asked her, her eyes tired and staring at the other woman in wonder. "If you think about all the thing's you have been through in life. Maybe you're already free" Veronica said simply. "I have never thought of it that way" the Indian woman responded standing up slowly. Veronica looked at her sighing softly "come over here" she smiled, Kiranjit did so slowly. Veronica placed her in front of the mirror and beamed at her brightly "you are a beautiful woman. Never let any man tell you other wise" she spoke carefully. "Thank you" Kiranjit replied smiling weakly, a half hearted smile, that shew her pain and suffering in one instant. Her pain that had wiped smiles from her emotions for days now. As the day went on Veronica stayed by her new friends side, making sure she was safe. Knowing knew girls were always targets in places such as this. Soon it was lock up time once again and they both sat down. Both sitting on the bottom part of the bunk beds that were inside the cell. "Why are you here?" Kiranjit asked nervously, realising she forgot to ask this question already. Veronica sighed "don't you worry about my crime, it is nothing" she sighed looking away, the honest truth was she'd rather not explain her past. Kiranjit slowly began to cry, the tears rolling down her skin. "Why are men such animals?" she said angrily, showing her true emotions for the first time since she'd been here. Veronica sighed and looked at her slowly "I don't know, not all men treat women with such cruel manners" she sighed. "Over and over again it happened" the Indian woman cried heavily, black make-up scaring her face. "What are you talking about? What happened?" Veronica whispered, Kiranjit lifted her top ever so slightly. A large black bruise graced her skin "who did that?" Veronica asked gently. "My husband" she whispered shaking, Veronica now understood why this poor woman was landed in here. "I see..." was the only words that could escape Veronica's lips. Kiranjit cried "he would just be so nice and then..." she sniffed trying to hold back more tears. "It happened again and again, he changed, why?" Kiranjit hissed to herself crying more and more as time went on.
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Post by mirandafan on Apr 16, 2007 0:33:47 GMT 9.5
I so want to see this film!! The story adds to the excitment.
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Post by EarlyBird on Apr 16, 2007 3:58:52 GMT 9.5
Veronica comforted her friend and sighed to herself, holding her tight. "You are safe now" she smiled carefully stroking Kiranjit's dark hair gently. "No one will hurt you again" Veronica whispered, "I promise" she smiled and raised the womans chin. "Well better get to sleep, a day of work tomorrow" she sighed deeply. "Work?" Kiranjit asked softly. "Yes, it's like earning our bloody keep here if i'm honest" she muttered sternly. The next morning Veronica was sitting down in the corner talking to some of the woman when she happened to glance up. She tilted her head so she could get a better view, what she saw was Kiranjit and the large woman from her first day hovering over her. Veronica put down her book and walked towards them both "oi! Didn't I tell you to leave her alone last time!?" she shouted. The woman looked round and laughed "you're very brave, or is very stupid the word i'm looking for!" she laughed. Veronica walked over and stood in front of Kiranjit "if you want to have a go at her, you'll have to go past me first!". The woman shrugged "have it your way" she suddenly slapped Veronica, but Veronica twisted her arm round straight after her hand had made contact. "Next time I say leave someone alone I bloody well mean it ok?" she snapped. The woman nodded pulling out of her grasp. "I'm not scared of you, just don't want to waste my time on ya!" she spat walking away angrily. "You ok?" Veronica asked gently, the woman nodded and stayed silent looking at her sadly. "You didn't have to do that, you are hurt" she said quietly. "Oh that, it was nothing, it'll soon clear up" she shrugged.
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Post by Tosca on Apr 16, 2007 6:45:31 GMT 9.5
Well, I don't know how much good my review will be since I never heard of the movie, but since you asked... it's nice! Storyline is involving, and very imaginative if you've only seen the trailers, so kudos for that.
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Post by himiko on Apr 16, 2007 6:46:21 GMT 9.5
What Tosca said
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Post by EarlyBird on Apr 16, 2007 6:50:56 GMT 9.5
lol hehe more will come:)
Veronica stood in her cell looking in the mirror at her red cheek, whenever her hand came into contact with it. A burning feeling went through her cheek. Kiranjit stared at her as she walked in and sighed "it is not nothing" she sighed. "It is surely something" she added softly. Veronica looked round and smiled "I am fine honestly, I have taken worse then that believe me". "From your husband?" Kiranjit asked firmly, Veronica looked down then up quickly "enough about me" she sighed. "Now come with me we are going to the library" she smiled brightly. "Why?" the Indian woman asked softly. "Because my dear I'm going to be your new teacher" she said plainly, Kiranjit looked at her and stayed still. "Teach me what?" she asked in confusion, Veronica smiled and led her to the library where she put down several books about english.
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Post by Mab Rox on Apr 16, 2007 7:28:18 GMT 9.5
*loves on this fic muchly* You rock so hard!
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Post by EarlyBird on Apr 16, 2007 8:16:32 GMT 9.5
aw your so sweet:Di'll add more hehe
"Now...let's begin" she smiled sitting Kiranjit down in a seat beside her. Kiranjit smiled but didn't know what was going on "what's all this?" she asked smiling. "This is your homework" she giggled, "I am going to help you with your case" Veronica said simply. A week later Kiranjit was sitting in her cell when she heard a large noise from outside. "You stupid Bitch!" a familiar voice shouted loudly, booming down the halls like thunder. Kiranjit walked out and found Veronica on the floor with a bloody nose, her hand automatically moving towards the blood. "I told you to stay out of my way" the large woman shouted once more, louder this time about to grab Veronica. When Kiranjit ran out and stood in her way "if you want to hurt her you will have to go through me first" she said sternly. Veronica realised those same words she said herself and watched the womans reaction to this, but before she could react an officer walked past. "You were lucky this time" she barked.
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Post by hilloneko on Apr 17, 2007 7:50:40 GMT 9.5
I love it ^^.
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Post by EarlyBird on Apr 17, 2007 15:59:10 GMT 9.5
yay:Dmore coming then
Kiranjit sat down with Veronica in their cell "Ronnie...are you alright?" she asked nervously. Veronica gave a small gentle smile, then a little laugh, she always did this, trying to cover up her pain with fake laughter. "I am fine" Veronica smiled and sighed, shrugging her shoulders to try and get some feeling back into them. "You saved me" Veronica said plainly, "thank you" she whispered pulling Kiranjit close. The Indian woman smiled happily at her friend "no thank you, it is you who learns me what to say" she giggled. "Teaches" she corrected, "it's me who teaches you what to say" she beamed stroking Kiranjit's long dark hair. "Now it's almost tea time, so we better get out there or that woman would have cleared them out" she giggled. Kiranjit laughed, the first proper smile gracing her face as she looked at her friend happily. "You have a lovely smile, don't be afraid to show it" Veronica whispered, she stroked Kiranjit's cheek before walking off down the hall. They had their tea and then Veronica looked up as an officer came over "Veronica..." he sighed. Veronica looked up and put down the cup she was drinking from "that's me, whose asking?" she frowned. "There's a phone call for you" he said plainly, Veronica looked at her friend and looked about before carefully standing up. "Will you be alright?" Kiranjit's friend asked slowly, Kiranjit smiled "yes" she said strongly. Veronica walked towards the office and sighed deeply to herself, after minutes she was dropping the phone which she held. A loud bang could be heard in her ears. She walked towards her friend sitting down without a word, she tried to act like nothing had happened. That she just didn't get the worse news of her life. "Ronnie?" Kiranjit asked bravely. Veronica looked up, tears filling her eyes "he's dead" she cried heavily. "Whose dead?" she asked softly, Veronica looked down towards the table "my husband, I could be charged with murder" she muttered to herself. Kiranjit stared at her and embraced her carefully, "did your husband do what mine did to me?" she asked. Veronica got up out of her friends grip saying nothing, which to anyone would mean she's hiding something. Kiranjit followed Veronica back in their cell and slowly closed the door. "My husband used to beat me, that's all he ever did, not like you had but...you know when you get to that sudden moment. A moment where you realise you don't deserve this. That you shouldn't be beaten by anyone let alone your husband. Well that was my moment, he hit me, one hit, almost a slap really. But it was there and I grabbed it, didn't even know what I had picked up at first. But when I saw him laying on the floor I knew, a knife was covered with blood, all over my hands. I tried to wash it off but" she breathed in and sniffed back her tears. "The police already came, the next door neibours heard screams. Then I ended up here, my sentence will be longer now, But at least I am free" she whispered closing her eyes tightly. Another set of tears falling down her cheeks as Kiranjit held her closer.
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Post by avalon on Apr 20, 2007 0:24:39 GMT 9.5
YOUKNOW YOU RE BRRRRRRRRRRRRILIANT vantasselhighorder DEAREST FRIEND...YOUR STORY FANCIES ME,I AM STILL WAITING FOR THE RELEASE OF THE DVD, THE SAME STORE YOU WERE WAITING SO..DARN IT!!
PATIENCE MY PET...LOVE YA.... WE WANT MORE ABOUT VERONICA PLZZZZZZZ
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