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Post by bluebell on Jan 13, 2010 4:40:52 GMT 9.5
Is Lady Alison Lord Clive's daughter, or um...wife? lol This will be very interesting! (sorry Clive )
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Post by stephowrites on Jan 13, 2010 7:32:49 GMT 9.5
No, they aren't related. They are both members of the court. I am not sure what will go on there throughout the story, though!
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Post by EarlyBird on Jan 21, 2010 9:48:42 GMT 9.5
Can't wait to read this story
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Post by stephowrites on Jan 22, 2010 7:22:25 GMT 9.5
I hate when I don't complete a story! Luckily, having you guys involved is encouraging me to write! I will have to type some up soon and put it on here!
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Post by Annette Claus on Jan 22, 2010 11:06:59 GMT 9.5
I can't wait until we get the first glimpse of it!!!!! I don't even know much about the story but it sounds amazing!
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Post by stephowrites on Jan 26, 2010 5:49:34 GMT 9.5
Well, with how busy I am, I have been slacking and not writing very often. I will try to write soon for all of you guys!!
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Post by EvaTheEvilWitchie on Feb 2, 2010 2:14:26 GMT 9.5
Am I too late to be in your story Stepho?
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Post by stephowrites on Feb 4, 2010 7:11:22 GMT 9.5
I can certainly include you, Eva!!
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Post by stephowrites on Feb 4, 2010 7:16:36 GMT 9.5
Ok, so I was getting rather bored with the story I was writing, it seemed so much like one I had just written. So I decided to scrap my old idea and go with something fresh. I am still going to include all of you and if anyone else wants to be in it, just say the word! So, I have just begun a fantasy story. Ali, you are still my main character, I am not sure who everyone else is, since I just began writing, but I will fit you all in as the story progresses! (Libitine, I have an evil character in mind for you! ) I am gonna post the opening to my story for you all to read! I hope you like it, comments are welcome! The gold edged mirror reflected a beauty that is impossible to envision, unless you have been in the presence of a gently flowing waterfall, gushing white water over perfect, round stones, glistening in the glow of a majestic, full moon, with a pearl, white swan below, arching her slender neck to the sky to see the trailing beams of light the shooting star leaves dancing in the night sky. And even if you have seen such a sight, you would be able to picture the one hundred and forty-two shades of red in the girl’s hair and the fiery orange streak in each of her eyes. The eighteen year old boy roughly brushed his shaggy, brown hair out of his pale green eyes. He sighed deeply as a wooden, brown door with a crown carved into the center appeared through the grassy wilderness. He attempted to flatten his straggly hair, but surrendered this mission with another deep sigh. Then he knocked gently on the aged door frame. The Princess leapt off her little stool and nearly tripped over one of the vanity’s legs, stubbing her toe in the speedy process. She smiles at her own foolishness and, ignoring the throbbing pain in her big toe, she ran to the front door and threw it open…
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Post by EvaTheEvilWitchie on Feb 4, 2010 7:57:47 GMT 9.5
Aww Thank you very much Steph! It's a crazy idea to be in a story!! ;D I really liked the begining. The white swan seemed a lovely touch for the story Your descriptons are very deep and with all the vocabulary you've added you help me a lot to improve my English. Go on!
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Post by stephowrites on Feb 4, 2010 8:09:05 GMT 9.5
Thanks so much!! I'm really glad you like it! I look words and using exciting different words!!
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Post by Annette Claus on Feb 4, 2010 13:20:41 GMT 9.5
Your story is beautiful so far!!! Please continue writing it! I can't wait to read more! You are a really good writer!
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Post by stephowrites on Feb 4, 2010 13:50:26 GMT 9.5
Thanks so much! It means a lot to me that you like my writing so much!!
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Post by EarlyBird on May 8, 2010 23:54:38 GMT 9.5
Loved your first bit XD I am lady Alison so am I the Princess or the mother hehe? XD this will be interesting love to read more.
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