An evening star-Patsy is found out

[EarlyBird]

I loved Evening star, everyone was great. This is a script showing another way Aurora could have confronted Patsy about her sleeping with Jerry.

Int-Patsy's House
Aurora is outside, waiting for someone to answer the door for her.

Patsy: If you want something done do it yourself. (opens it)

Aurora: (smiles too sweetly) Patsy, I thought we could have a cup of tea and a nice little chat.

Patsy: (confused) Oh...Yes...Do come in.

Aurora: I've just come back from popping in on Jerry.

Patsy: Oh...How is he?

Aurora: He's great. We're great.

Patsy: I haven't seen you this happy in a long time.

Aurora: I just want to ask one little thing of you Patsy.

Patsy: Of course...

Aurora: I know you have always had a problem with taking things that aren't yours. Melanie for example. You seem to ruin every single precious moment I have with her.

Patsy: I knew something was up. You seemed too happy for it to be real.

Aurora: I want you to stay away from Jerry.

Patsy: Why would I go anywhere near Jerry?

Aurora: Oh so there must have been someone elses yellow belt lying on the floor of his bedroom.

Patsy: Aurora, I can explain.

Aurora: I don't need your explanations Patsy.

Patsy: Well...Are you still seeing him?

Aurora: No. I am worth more then a man who will cheat with family.

Patsy: So just because you don't want him, I can't have him either? Is that what you're saying?

Aurora: Finally she gets the message.
You know Patsy I never thought you were one of those dumb Blondes. But it seems I was right about you.

Patsy: (gasps in shock) How dare you! I graduated from one of the most well known colleges and I was top of my class.

Aurora: Save your speeches for someone who gives a shit. I'm finished with you Patsy. I wash my hands of you. You may have been Melanie's...Friend. And you may have been my daughters. But you are not mine. Do I make myself clear?

Patsy: As mud. (frowns and turns away, pouring herself a drink).

Aurora: I'll see myself out. (walks out and slams the door).

Comments please, first time writing either of these characters.
And if you want more let me know.

[Annette Claus]

I can imagine both Shirley and Miranda saying this, it really suits their characters!

[EarlyBird]

Thanks hun xxx

[Mandy]

that's good!(as always!) I love read your work!!!!!!!!!!
more please

[EarlyBird]

Thankies darling xxx *hugs*

[EarlyBird]

Melanie has been living with Patsy

Melanie: You can't control my everymove Patsy! You're not my mother.

Patsy: You're right I'm not. Your mothers not here anymore. I am looking after you while Aurora is away and you're just going to have to deal with it.

Melanie: I thought this would be a good thing. I mean we always wanted this.

Patsy: It would be a good thing if you didn't do stupid things like just now.

Melanie: Oh well excuse me for wanting to be with my boyfriend.

Patsy: Look...I don't want you getting pregnant right now. You don't have a job and I'm not going to support you forever.

Melanie: Oh God Patsy, I'm not an idiot.

Patsy: I only want what's best for you.

Melanie: God you sound like Granny.

Patsy: Well even she couldn't get through to you, so what hope have I got.

Melanie: (calms down) Patsy. I'm sorry okay. I want to be here with you. I always thought of you a bit like my mother.

Patsy: All I ever wanted was your happiness.

Melanie: I know.

Patsy: (hears her phone ring and answers it) Hello. (looks confused) It's the bank (to Melanie).
Em hum...Yes I did...A what? Okay...Thanks bye. (hangs up and grabs her car keys). One of my darling children have just brought a sports car on my card, in my name. For 22 thousand dollars.

Melanie: Wow. I'd love a car like that.

Patsy: Don't get any ideas. I have to go and talk to my son before he buys a yot.

Melanie: Can I come?

Patsy: You like jumbo jets?

Melanie: Planes? I don't mind them why?

Patsy: Cause I have to fly all the way to England to find the little sneak.

Melanie: Oh. Yeah I'm okay with that.

Patsy: Good. We don't need to pack anything. We wont be staying there long. And anything we need I can buy for us.

Melanie: Patsy?

Patsy: Em hum?

Melanie: Can I have a loan?

Patsy: No.

Melanie: But last time...

Patsy: Melanie...I just loaned you a thousand dollars last week. You have to make it last. I'm not a cash machine.

Melanie: Says the woman who wont pack but will buy us a whole new wardrobe when we're out there.

Patsy: Just get your coat. It will be chilly outside.

Melanie: (grabs her coat) How long will Granny be gone?

Patsy: Another couple of days. If we're not back by then I'll ring Rosie.

Melanie: Maybe I should stay here...For when Granny comes back.

Patsy: No. I don't want to leave you in this big empty house until I get back. Come on. (takes her hand and walks outside to the car).

In England

Patsy: (knocks on her sons door)

Tom: (opens the door in his towel) Mum...Hi...

Patsy: (looks annoyed)

Tom: I can explain.

Patsy: I told you if there was anything small you needed, to buy it. But if it was big to ask me first.
And what do you do? You buy a 22 thousand dollar car and I get a call from the bank.

Tom: Why did they call you?

Patsy: Cause I told them if anything comes out from either place where you or your sisters live. That I want to know if it is more then what we agreed.

Tom: I need the car Mum. For work.

Patsy: (walks inside) Freezing out there. (sits down and crosses one leg over the other).

Tom: Want to take a drive in my new car?

Patsy: My car.

Tom: Mum come on...

Patsy: It's my car. In my name. With my money.

Tom: Oh come on Mum stop being such a Bitch about it. And anyway the cars in my name. So it is 'my' car.

Patsy: Call me a Bitch again Mr and you wont have access to my account anymore.

Tom: (laughs in amusement)

Patsy: Oh you think I'm joking. (stands up and picks up his wallet).

Tom: Mum...What are you doing?

Patsy: (takes out her credit card and picks up some scissors).

Tom: Wow wow. Okay. Sorry.

Patsy: (puts everything down and stares at him). Keys.

Tom: You're going to take it aren't yah?

Patsy: No. I am going to take it for a drive and then go for lunch with Melanie.

Melanie: Hi.

Tom: I didn't notice you were here.

Melanie: You two were too busy having a screaming match.

Tom: Sorry (hugs her) I'll go get changed.

Patsy: Keys!

Tom: (grabs the keys out of his coat pocket and hands them to her).

Patsy: Thank you (walks out of the door and towards the sparkling white car in the garage).

[Mandy]

very good and interested work thank you!!!

[EarlyBird]

Thanks hun I might update again so keep your eyes peeled xxx