The Millionares wife-Part 1

[EarlyBird]

I got this idea of a woman who is married to a millionare. I first thought maybe she killed him but now I am gunna do it that they are in a loveless marriage type thing. Maybe she does kill him later, who knows. The idea came from the new drama/thriller Miranda might be doing. Please read and comment. If you have tips on how I can addapt or add detail then let me know just put it nicely. Enjoy
I am using the name Madeline, I love this name it's from death becomes her.

© Alison Garwood

Int. Madeline's home-Night
A blonde haired wealthy looking woman is sat wearing a dark red suit, which consists of a skirt and blouse with a red jacket.
She is staring blankly at the clock, she is waiting for her husband.

Max: I'm home

Max her millionare husband walks in wearing a suit. A simple white shirt and a tailored suit.

Mad: Well well well. Look what the cat dragged in.

Max: Hello to you too hunny.

Mad: Don't even start with me. You've had your phone off all day, you have been unreachable. (chucks the phone into his hands) Care to explain that to me. Hunny (mockingly)

Max: I was in a meeting and I didn't have my phone on.

Mad: You always have your phone on.

Max: This was a really important meeting.

Mad: Or was it a really secret affair? (arches her eyebrows)

Max: No. It was a meeting, stop being paranoid Mad. It does my head in.

Mad: Snap, you're giving me a migrane.

Max: Save it for your therapist.

Mad: And why do I have one? (silence) Because I have a husband who cares more about his money and his business then me!

Max: Do you know how ridiculous you sound?

Mad: I don't need to listen to this.

Madeline begins to walk away when he grabs her arm.

Max: You should be grateful.

Mad: Grateful? (amused) Why the hell should I be grateful?

Max: Because of what I've made you into.

Mad: Oh and what is that dear? A mad woman! (shouts angrily).

Max: No. Into a rich woman who is respected and known by many people in this town.

Mad: You made me into what I am today? I don't think so.

Max: You think that lot of stuck up snobs would give you the light of day if you weren't rolling in it?

Mad: You didn't make me into anything...

Max: You are what you are because of me. Face it...You're nothing without me.

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[LadyoftheNight]

cool

[EarlyBird]

More to come xxx thank you for reading it

[EarlyBird]

Mad: Now who sounds ridiculous, hum?

Max: Go to bed. Take some migrane pills and be quiet.

Mad: Since when do I listen to you?

Max: Since now.

Mad: I'm a grown woman. Just because you bring in the money doesn't mean I'm going to do whatever you want. I'm not your slave.

Max: (pulls her close by her waist and kisses her neck).

Mad: And I'm not your whore ither. (pushes him away) I'll sleep in my room.

Max: Fine. See if I care. (pours himself a drink and sits down on the leather sofa).

Mad: (walks up the stairs, her heels clicking).

Max: (sips his drink and puts it down before following her upstairs).

Int. Mad's house-Morning
Madeline is ignoring Max while she sits and fixes her makeup. He is umcomftable with the silence and keep clearing his throat.

Mad: Can you just stop it!

Max: It lives (smiles at her sarcastically).

Mad: Just shut up Max. You made me smudge my makeup. (uses her finger to adjust it)

Max: I don't know why you women seem intent on painting your whole face.

Mad: You've seen me in the morning without makeup.

Max: And I have to say you look beautiful.

Mad: This isn't going to work.

Max: What isn't?

Mad: Sweet talking me...You can't get around me that easily.

© Alison Garwood

[ladygiry]

Pretty good so far.

[EarlyBird]

Thank you means alot when people like and read my stuff.

[EarlyBird]

Max: I'm just saying it how it is. You are beautiful without all that junk on your face.

Mad: Thank you. (sighs and stands up) Right I must go.

Max: Go? Go where?

Mad: I'm going out to the bar and then to meet some of the ladies.

Max: To talk about how reched your husbands are?

Mad: Maybe...But I bet you do the same at your poker nights.

Max: No...

Mad: (nods) Yes you do. (grabs her handbag) And we might pop out for abit of shopping to.

Max: Don't max out my card.

Mad: That would be impossible do you know how much I have on my card?

Max: Yes I do because I put it in there. But it's not in there for a huge shopping spree with your lady friends.

Mad: Oh? Then what is it for?

Max: Emergencies, food...Clothes.

Mad: When I said shopping I meant clothes.

Max: Normal clothes not expensive ball gowns and items that cost more then a thousand each.

Mad: How little you know me. My outfits always come in at under a thousand. This suit for example...(gesture to her clothes) Six hundred and fifty five pounds.

Max: As much as I like you buying nice things I Just...

Mad: (swings her bag over her shoulder) Wasn't it you who said I should look pretty on your arm at functions?

Max: Yes but that doesn't mean...

Mad: Bye (walks out)

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[EarlyBird]

Max: (his phone rings and he picks it up) Hello. I told you it's fine. Well she doesn't have to know does she. Yes...I'll do it. Don't worry. Bye (hangs up)

Mad: (standing in the doorway) What was that?

Max: Mad...I thought you'd gone shopping.

Mad: You didn't answer my question. What was that?

Max: Just a business call.

Mad: Just a business call (amused). Dodgy business more like.

Max: It's nothing.

Mad: Don't lie to me. I'm not an idiot.

Max: (sighs) I have to go.

Mad: (grabs his hand) Don't do anything stupid. I don't want you to get hurt.

Max: (takes his hand away and walks out).

Mad: (covers her mouth and begins to sob).

Ext. Madeline's home-Night
Madeline is stood outside looking around in the dark for her husband. She sees him moments later walking towards the house.

Mad: Where have you been?

Max: Doesn't matter, it's sorted.

Mad: (grabs his arm) Stop keeping things from me.

Max: (looks at her) Just leave it.

Mad: No. You stop whatever you're doing or I'm going.

Max: Fine.

Mad: (pulls away rushes inside and upstairs to pack her bags).

© Alison Garwood

[EarlyBird]

Max: Mad...Mad don't be silly. Come downstairs.

Mad: (huffs and zips the bag up rushing downstairs).

Max: Madeline!

Mad: What? (snaps)

Max: You can't just leave me.

Mad: Watch me!

Max: We can work it out.

Mad: No we can't. Not this time...I've given you too many second chances and I don't plan on giving you another one.

Max: Okay...I messed up...

Mad: You always do. I've had enough (sighs)

Max: (walks up to her and slowly takes the bag from her hand).

Mad: You're not going to stop me from leaving. Not this time.

Max: I love you

Mad: (amused) You don't give a damn about me and you never have.

Max: Don't be stupid, you are my wife...I don't want to lose you.

Mad: You already have. (yanks her hand away and picks up her suitcase). Goodbye Max.

Max: Where will you go?

Mad: My mothers.

Max: Oh she'll love that, she's right about me again. You really want to give her the satisfaction? Do you?

Mad: (looks back at him) It's better then living in a loveless marriage.

© Alison Garwood

[Mandy]

very good work!you have a great imagination personnally I don't have !
xxx

[aussie_girl95]

very good

great imagination

[EarlyBird]

Int. Max's home-Day
It's months later and Madeline pulls up in her car which is driven by a man dressed in a suit. She sighs and looks at the driver before getting out of the car.
She uses the knocker on the door and waits for a reply.

Max: Look if you're selling something (opens the door) Mad...You came back.

Mad: Not for you. I came back because I have something to tell you.

Max: I have to admit you are making me a little nervous here Mad.

Mad: Can I come in?

Max: (nods) It's still your house.

Mad: Thank you (sighs and walks to the lounge).

Max: So...How is the mother in law? Still happy her daughter is at home and not with her husband?

Mad: Max, this is serious.

Max: Sit down and tell me what's wrong.

Mad: I don't want to sit down.

Max: Then just tell me. (silence) Mad you're driving me insane, just tell me what the hells going on with you!

Mad: I'm pregnant.

Max: What? (in complete shock) Pregnant? How the heck did this happen?

Mad: If you don't know how a baby's created you need to go back to school. (sarcastic)

Max: Don't patronise me.

Mad: I'm having a baby Max...That's all I came to tell you.

Max: And is it mine?

Mad: Of course it's yours, who else would it be?

Max: Maybe since you left you found some handsome younger man to play with.

Mad: No (shakes her head). So...(sighs) What are we going to do?

Max: I don't know (sits down with his head in his hands).

Mad: You can have visitation.

Max: Just come back to me Mad...I'm begging you.

Mad: Why should I? You think just because of this baby I should come back and play happy families? Well I can't do that Max. I can't.

Max: I promise I am just working at the company now. Everything else is history. It wasn't even anything that bad. It was just some cheap stuff I got on the quiet.

Mad: I see. It doesn't mean I can trust you.

Max: You have to. I swear I never wanted this to happen. I love you...Come on Mad...You know you love me just as much as I love you.

Mad: Do I? What are you psychic?

Max: (stands) We belong together. I can prove to you I've changed.

Mad: But have you? Have you really changed or are you just sweet talking your way back into my heart again?

Max: It's the truth. I've changed, I am going to be here for you and the baby. I want you to be here so you can get the best care available. Waited on hand and foot. Please let me do this for you. Just stay and we can get back to normal.

Mad: Unless it's how it was when we first met eachother I don't like the way it used to be.

Max: It will be like at the start. Where we were in love and happy. Couldn't keep our hands off eachother. It will be romantic and perfect. I promise I wont screw this up. You just have to try and trust me. Can you do that for me Madeline? Can you find it in your heart to give me one final chance? Please.

Mad: (is getting teary eyed) One chance. But I swear if you screw this up!

Max: (talks over her) I wont, I promise.

Mad: Then you'll have to send for my things. They are still at my mothers and I am in no condition to get them myself. (looks around her house happily) I missed this place.

Max: Good to be home hay?

Mad: Yes it is. (looks back at him) Did you find anyone else while I was away? And tell me truthfully.

Max: No (shakes his head). You can ask anyone, I never brought anyone back here. And I never even kissed another woman.

Mad: So all this time you were hoping I'd come back to keep you from being lonely?

Max: Something like that (smiles).

Mad: (kisses his lips) I hope it was worth the wait. (smiles and walks to the hall, looking at all the old paintings that are on the walls).

Max: So how far gone are you? (wraps his arms around her from behind).

Mad: Three months. Hardly showing yet though.

Max: Is that a good or a bad thing? (worried)

Mad: I don't know (pushes her hair away from her face). Some women have gone to full term without even knowing their pregnant.

Max: Are you serious? How can you not know you're pregnant?

Mad: I dunno. Guess if you don't really have morning sickness you wouldn't unless you took a test. I don't know. But either way I will get plenty of checkups to make sure everything is going as it should be.

Max: Good cause I wont risk anything happening to either of you.

Mad: I'll be fine, don't you worry about me. Just make sure I am well looked after and you wont get a heel where it hurts. (smiles playfully).

Max: That's incouraging. (sarcastic)

© Alison Garwood

[queenelspeth]

Love it.
Made me smile.
More please!

[EarlyBird]

good glad you love it more will come tonight xxx

[Mandy]

loool I like ^^